WWW: A reasonably solid evaluation that reflects on some
strengths and weaknesses accurately. The paragraph towards the end that
discusses the body language of the characters is the strongest aspect – you are
specific and consider the impact of media language choices on a potential
audience. I’d like to see much more of that!
EBI: There’s just not enough depth and detail overall for
the higher grades. You do consider the audience (as mentioned above) which is a
positive but I’d like much more detailed and specific discussion of certain
shots, transitions etc. The reflection on the lack of effective planning is
important and this is something you definitely need to address for the real
coursework.
LR:
- more detail and depth in my analysis and evaluation
- focus more on audience and the impact on them
- focus more certain shots and transitions
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